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Saturday, May 16, 2020

A Love Story, Part 5: The Creek


Click for Part 4: Guilty


Murky water splashed between Anthropy’s ankles and a soft wind brushed her hair into her emotionless face. It was the first day of the week and her parents were resting at home, but she preferred to sit on the old tree branch just over the creek. Weary eyes not focusing on anything in particular; deep in her chest her wound still throbbed, robbing her of what little energy she might have had to notice that the birds were singing, or that the sun sparkled on the water. It had been three years since Khriein’s arrest, and she hadn’t missed a day coming to the creek where they’d met.
Softly she sang an old lullaby that she’d learnt from her mother. She didn’t know what it was called, but her parents had declared it to be “At least as old as the hills.”

Woman, why weepest thou?
They have taken away my love, and I know not where they have laid him.
Woman, who seekest thou?
If you have taken away my love, tell me where you have laid him.

“Anthropy.”

The sound disrupted her apathy, startling her so violently that she overbalanced and crashed into the stream. Her ringing ears hadn't deceived her. The arms gently lifting her out of the water were more familiar than her own freckled nose. His strong arms were now riddled with scars, but looking at his face she encountered the same grin he’d given her the first day they’d met.

“Is it really you?” She tremored, barely audible.

“Of course it is!” He was laughing as he spoke, but his eyes were locked with hers, as though if he blinked he might lose her again.

Tears were streaming down both of their cheeks, and her smile suddenly crumpled. “Khriein, I’m so sorry. You should not have come back to me!” Her eyes searched his desperately as a sob threatened to tear from her throat.

He set her down gently and wiped her tears away, “Don’t you know you’re forgiven?”

She knew it then, and the old wound finally started to heal.

“Anthropy,” he probed, “Do you love me?”

She remembered his proposal, such a long time ago. His goofy grin as he blushed, the next moment declaring, “That is—I love you!”

She nodded. 

“Anthropy,” he said again, “Do you love me?”

She remembered the love songs he had sung to her in the barn; her wilful ignorance stung now.

“Yes,” she said.

“Anthropy,” he said a third time, searching her eyes, “Do you love me?”

She remembered the third time the judge asked her, “Are you sure you don’t know him?” and how she had sworn she didn’t.

“Yes!” Tears flowed freely, stinging the part of her heart that had decided to betray the one who loved her this much.

Grasping her hand, he knelt in the soft river mud and withdrew a ring from his pocket. “Anthropy, will you marry me?”

“Of course!” She cried.

He fitted the ring on her finger and scooped her up in his arms, warning her that he might never put her down again.


But this, of course, was only the beginning of their story.

Tuesday, March 31, 2015

I Can Take A Hint

Hello All!

This is another in-the-meantime post, because I STILL haven't gotten my big one together yet.

Today, I thought I would share with you a neat story that happened recently.

A little while ago, I decided to close my blog.

I wrote up a Farewell blog post, and decided that I would end it with a bang, so I made plans for a really awesome post about God.

I'll let you read a piece of my Farewell which gives you the reason for folding.

"I have received lots of encouragement from my family and friends, but I always felt that I needed to have a vision, a purpose for why I was writing. But I didn't have anything.

In short, I don't feel like I am "called" to be writing this blog, and so I'd rather not. I have thoroughly enjoyed updating it and am very thankful to all of my encouragers, and if God shows me that I should pick it up again, I will, but for now, I am putting it to rest.

It will still be here for you all to read if you feel like going back over my posts, but I will not be updating.

SO. I thought, as a farewell post, I should write something awesome! And what is more awesome than God Himself?

The following  post is a small, quick picture of my Savior. I know I won't be able to do Him justice, but I hope it is a cool snapshot.

So this is it for this post, my next one will be the OFFICIAL farewell, and much less gloomy than this one, I promise. ;)

Until then!

~Keturah"

But my plans got interrupted pretty quickly.

The same day that I officially decided to close it, I received a Facebook message from someone encouraging me, and telling me that they love Counting Blessings. That gave me a little remorseful feeling, but I had known that people would be disappointed, so I wasn't discouraged.

Only a few hours later we went to a meal at our church, a man whom I know came by to tell me that some people that he had read my blog to were very excited about my writing.

I thought, Okay...It's fine. They can get over it. I don't have a reason for writing, so I am still going to close it.

The next day I found a post that I had written a while ago and never published, so I posted it, and someone commented to tell me that they love my blog.

Seriously, it was like everyone was trying to get me to keep it, even though I had not told a soul my plans.

The next day I got ANOTHER Facebook message, again, encouraging me, telling me to keep writing.

By that time I was seriously doubting my own judgement. The next day, I finally consulted my dad.

"Should I keep posting on my blog?" I asked.

"Why is that even a question?" He said.

I explained the situation, (excluding all of the encouraging people) and he told me why he thought I should keep it.

By the end of it, I basically said, "You know what, I can take a hint."

It was too much, and too direct, to ignore.

I have decided that I will keep writing, without a vision or a mission statement, because even though I don't have a purpose for Counting Blessings, obviously God does.

So that's it! This is not my second last post friends, I will probably have many more to come. :)

“For My thoughts are not your thoughts, Nor are your ways My ways,” says the Lord. “For as the heavens are higher than the earth, So are My ways higher than your ways, And My thoughts than your thoughts. (Isaiah 55:8, 9)